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【模範解答】IELTS Task2 Band 7.0 Model Essay2ーWritten by Sayaー

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課題 Model Essay 2

Some people think that travelling is an exciting activity. How have methods of travel changed in past years? How do you think travel will develop in the next few decades?

エッセー (Written by Saya)

Every year, the number of travelers is increasing. This travel boom is predicted widespread globally. This essay will discuss the changes in modern travelling that led to the current trend and predict their changes for the future.

Compare with previous days, modern travels are much easier and faster. The primary contributors are airplanes. In the past, their flight tickets were expensive that only limited rich passengers could take. Nowadays, they are becoming a more common mode of transportation. Low-Cost Carriers (LCCs) such as AirAsia and Jetstar, provide significantly cheap tickets. They have flights all over the world, therefore, travelling abroad is not a big event anymore. Furthermore, the current passport includes IC chips. This allows air passengers to pass through automation immigration gates in airports. These changes created a short flight time with less waiting time at the airport.

Unfortunately, in some countries, automation immigration gates are not working properly. Therefore, this system is still effective in certain countries such as Canada and Japan. In the future, not only I expect that this system will be installed properly across the world but also passports themselves will be no longer needed. This makes air transportation more convenient and increases the number of air travelers.

In conclusion, this essay has explained the changes in travelling and predict future changes. Due to the development of air systems such as cheaper ticket prices and the convenience of passport control encouraged people to travel easily. However, passport systems have still a place for improvement. I expect this will be developed appropriately in the future.

259 words 

IELTS実践対策:覚えておきたいフレーズ

the number of 〜 is increasing

  • the number of ~ is increasing :ますます〜が増えている

(ex) The number of car accidents is increasing in Japan.

(日本における自動車事故は増加している。)

The number of 〜のあとのbe 動詞は “is”なので、注意です!

widespread

  • widespread:広く行き渡った

(ex) The typhoon last year caused widespread destruction.

(昨年の台風は、広範囲に甚大な被害を及ぼした。)

a common mode of 〜

  • a common mode of 〜:よく使われる方法

(ex) The train is a common mode of transportation in Tokyo.

(電車は東京でよく使われている交通手段である。)

automation immigration gate

  • automation immigration gate:入国審査時の自動ゲート

(ex) Haneda airport has installed an automation immigration gate.

(羽田空港は自動ゲートを導入した。)

air travelers

  • air travelers:飛行機での旅行者

(ex) There is a decline in the number of air travelers this year.

(今年は飛行機での旅行者が現象した。)

have a place for improvement

  • have a place for improvement:改善の余地がある

(ex) The new tax system has a place for improvement.

(新しい税金制度は、改善の余地がある。)

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