【模範解答】Task2 IELTS Band 7.0 Model Essay4

The serious issue of students’ difficulties in finding a full-time career is mainly caused by the economic situation of some countries which is caused by the recession. Most companies in those nations have dropped their profits which renders them unable to hire new employees. The nineties in Japan constitute a good example of this situation. After Japan experienced an economic crisis in 1990, many companies had closed down or accrued a great number of liabilities. As a result, the companies could not provide new positions for young generations and the graduates’ unemployment rate peaked in 1999.

Since a lack of job opportunities for university graduates and economic situation are significantly correlated, the best measure to tackle the problem is to improve the domestic economy. The government’s support via subsidies, such as funding for new investments and inventions are examples of effective ways to enhance the economy. This measure can encourage companies to create new job positions for young people by allowing for their business expansions.

To sum up, this essay has concluded that the economic situation, such as recession is the main cause of the high youth unemployment rate. For this reason, I have suggested that providing subsidies to companies would be an effective measure to improve the domestic economy to create full-time careers for new graduates. 

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